Wednesday, January 13, 2010

7th Grade Reading: HELP! I'm stranded on a deserted island!



Bright Dawn's father, Bartok, has disappeared from his location in which he was hunting bearded seals from. Bright Dawn searches the area for her father; however, she believes that he may be floating somewhere on a block of ice amongst the Bering Sea.

What would you do if you were Bartok? How would you spend your time if you were stranded somewhere? Imagine that you are stranded on a deserted island. The only thing that floated to shore with you is your laptop computer; however, you have no internet connection so you cannot contact anyone. Blog about your first two days on the deserted island.

Respond to my blog with your own blog, by clicking on "comments" below and typing in your information. Blog at least two paragraphs of your own thoughts. Below are some questions/ideas to get you thinking...

What was the first thing you did when you washed up on the shore of the island?
What did you do for food?
What did you use for protection? Shelter?
What did you discover/explore?
How did you feel? Why did you feel this way?

43 comments:

  1. Yesterday was my first day stranded on this remote island. I'm not sure how I arrived here; when I opened my eyes, I lay upon an endless white sandy beach. I checked my bag, that somehow managed to stay attached to my body during the storm, and found only my laptop. Crazy as it seems, it actually works!

    I rummaged the island for approximately 3 hours yesterday in hopes of food. I've never tasted the sweetness of a fresh coconut prior to this experience and I seem to believe that I will become rather used to this sweet taste. I am sunburnt already from the overbearing sun that beats down on me day in and day out. I'm lonely, scared to sleep for fear of what might happen to me, and just praying for some sort of miracle.

    -Mrs. Buhr, January 14, 2010

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  2. I'v swim the first two days and i would find a way to get on the internet where i could contact. I have to eat coconuts and dirnk water. I would use the trees for the shelter. I have discouver anything around you could be useavel. I felt lonely the first few days then i got use to it.

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  3. I woke up on the shore, wodnering where i am. I'd feel terrorfied on whats on the island not knowing who or what i might face. I had to eat and cook a grusome animal that i found. Its better than eating bugs. I built a giant leave tent under a slope of rock on a cliff side, making a door out of wood.

    I discovered a lot of cool places that i liked to be at. The sea shore kept my mind busy, since i could see the sand floor below, it was beautiful. I have no idea where i was, but soon my internet connection got connected from a remote service. I looked out to see a giant boat. I was saved.

    -Michael Cooney January 14th, 2010

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  4. i woke up today and was floteing away from were i was fishing bearded seals. my daughter black star wasnt there so i started FLIPPING out. i figured i might as well do what we came here for. so i started fishing for bearded seals where i found the secret to catching bearded seals. you have to move very slow so they get anctious and they bite on.

    i was so happy to figure the secret out so i wouldnt have to wait a day or to just for on. i got so happy i didnt realize that i was stranded on a freazing island. i was igsausted so i fell aslead with the stinky bearded seals.... the next morning i woke up to my daughter bright dawn who was yelling from a mile away. i had nothing but my laptop so i used that to padddle my way to shore. i got back home and my wife was happy to see me.

    -jimmy burgett, 1-14-10

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  5. Yesterday morning when I woke up, I found my self on a deserted island. I am glad that I still have my harpoon, the only thing is, is that it is stuck into a big chunck of ice. Maybe I'll try to unstick it by melting it. The only thing I have had to eat is a small crab and a coconut. I am starving!!

    I must of hit my head on something on the way here, beacuse i don't remember how I got here. I have managed to make a shelter though, it is made up of palm tree leaves and wood from trees that were broken in the storm two days ago.
    It is nighttime now and I have found more to eat than just coconuts and crabs. I have found a friut tree. An Orange tree, my personal favorite. well, I am very tired, so... goodnight.

    -Lily Hicks, January 14

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  6. the first thing i did is tryed to find food by hiting trees so coconuts fell. then i tryed to find a shelter by puting a bunch of sticks and leaves on a bent over tree.

    so after i made a shelter i desided to explore the island for treasure or something and i found a volcano i dont know how i missed that i climed to the top and inside there was a bunch of wood in it so i decided to go back to the shelter and make a fire. i fell kind of sick im going to try to make a sinal fire to get rescued.

    -jordan wolgamuth ,january 14

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  7. well the first thing i did was look around and wounder where i was at. At first i was scared and then i thought i have to find a way to survive and live then get away. Then i saw some clams and small animals i could kill easy and roast up and eat. After my little food encounter i thought well i need to get away from the sun and get away from the wild life so i forgde a nife from rock or wood and cut branches off trees. Then after i was all done with that i wove them together and made a hut kinda.


    Then after that i decided that well it was time to explore and find things i might need.... but mi was scared and felt lonely i havn't seen human life in a long time. I also was determined to fine away out of this place and.. i did


    -Donald Tinlin January 14th, 2010

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  8. I have hunted for food and play'd on windows narator and make it talk to me so i hade company. i went in shearch for food i found cocanuts boy was i happy.so i went to sleep under a tree.that morning i thought to myself just my luck im stranded on and island and board.



    later that day i took a nap and died of heat exhuastion.well thats what i thought as i was dreaming.as i woke up i found something to eat just my luck i got a fish.turns out it was poisinous i hade werid mind ilutions i swam out becuase i thought i saw a ship well it wasnt it was an odly large log.


    -julian zepeda- january,14

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  9. I awoke from the waves crashing near me, my eyes fluttered opened I saw a bag near me. i sat up and saw it was my bag i must've held on to it I checked what was inside and saw it was my laptop. I was surpised to see its could work I looked arounf and saw palm trees around me with also the sand that was now in my hair, my clothes, and my mouth eww! I started to get up and walked around with my bag in my hand with the laptop inside I saw the sea surrounded me. I gathered up all the food I could find and made a bed under the trees.

    Man, I was stuck on a island alone and trust me I hated it badly. I cracked open a coconut and drank the juice; its was bad it might tasted sweeter then milk and a different color of my favorite juice back home, I then eat some bananas I was okay with it but I hoped there aren't any bears on this island. You could guess I really missed my nice warm bed and my family but sadly I'm stuck on this unknown island, laying on a hard ground on leaves, and have to be aware of bears or snakes! I wanted be home now!

    -Josie Ortega Jan 14, 2010

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  10. Oh my gosh....I am so confused i dont kno were i am.I kno im on an island,All i have with me is my computer and the funny thing about it is....IT WORKS!!.I woke up on a patch of dead leaves,itchy and scratchy.My computer has NO connection to the internet what so ever.I need to make shelter and find food i really cant live on coconuts for how ever long im gonna be on this...this....ISLAND!!! I really need to contact someone i cant saty here for ever.iv tried and tried to contact someone ANYONE but its not working.I have made my shelter and found food coconut...of course and a tree of bananas its very refreshing in a weird sort of way.i gotta survive some how.my "house" is cozy ans=d i can actually sleep in it.But see thats a problem for me i dont know whats on this island and dont wanna find out.So now im gonna close my "door" and sleep.hopefully i dont get attacked by a monkey or something...good night now..............AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! -Anastasia Coleman january 14 2010

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  11. i have try to get a shelter to sleap in. Then i woold try to find food. My shelter is a cave that was infested whith bats. Then i cut a tree down with a rock. I used the leavs as a bed the branshes as a door to keep out the animals.

    The next day i found out that there was a plain chrash next to my camp. Wheen i got to the plain a monky was trying to get out. So i helped it he helped me get food. The monky ran off and reternd a day later and he had a family. They where lost but so was i.
    Memo Catalan 1/14/10

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  12. The first thing that I thought of when I washed up on the shore of the island, was that "I need to find food and some kind of shelter. Then after I figured out the solution to those two things, that I then realized that in order to complete these tasks, was that I would need to atleast find dry wood to make a fire for warmth at night and to cook any food that needed to be cooked. but then I realized that I couldn't build and/or make a fire if I don't have any matches or lighters. So since I thought about that, that then I realized that I would have to look for rocks that can creat sparks by strikeing them together. But its getting dark right now, so I will just sleep on. this is the end of day 1.

    well, this morning I was awoke by a strange roaring like sound. Kind of like thunder. but when I looked up at the sky, there were no clouds in the sky at all. But the thunder like sound was coming closer and closer. then I saw a plane coming toward the island that i was on. And it was landing! I couldn't beleave my luck at all! I was being saved!

    Brandon Fegter January 14, 2010

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  13. Im stuck on a standed island. the first day I was scared at first and thought that I would never be found, but I know someone will come to look for me. So I went to find food. I had to eat some nasty fish, coconuts, and berry's. I dont like fish so i stuck with berry's and coconuts. To keep warm I had to find large leafs and sticks. I bilt a shelter that was just big enough for me.

    I'm suprised I survived this long with no cell phone, internet, real food, and clean clothes. Not knowing whats out here, or if I'll ever be able to go back home. Scared I wont live to be 14. I hope help comes soon.

    -Marana Jones, January 14, 2010

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  14. I woke up yesterday I found a monkey sitting on me.I woke up screaming because the monkey was literally sitting on my head. i went into the forest to find something to eat and guesss what?
    All I found were some COCONUTS! It's better than just sitting in the middle of nowhere so I took 2 coconuts.They lasted for about 3 hours. Do you want I did? I went back to the forest and I searched harder I found what I BEN LOKKING FOR!!!
    BANANAS!!!!! I found about 10 bananans I COMPLETED MY MISSION!!!

    Ontriera Brown Janurary 14,2010

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  15. Thomas Prusha Jan 14,2010
    Icant beleive that you have no food.I am bring Nintendo DS to the little island.But if there was no electricaty there I won't bring it. On day two I would be starving! If i don'tmy blood suger would be low. Without a telaphone i won't survive. And i would play on my computer but with no internet I won't play it!

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  16. As soon as i woke up i screamed, there was a ton of giant spiders next to me!I got up and jumped back. i couldn't beleive that! ick!So far, for food, I ate bananas, and coconuts. and really any plant. I am trying my hardest to be able to find different sorts of foods, just not seafood! I gathered up my leafy bed and took it farther from shore, just incase there was going to be high tide that day. I went into the small woods,to look for dry wood. I had decided right then i was going to try for help. I took it close to shore, and made a fire, i made it smokey by putting leafs into it.

    Later that day, i still hadn't had any luck with help. so i decided to make a tent. i gathered more wood and big leafs. i had to try my hardest and do my best, i knew at that moment that was all i could do. I dug into the sand and stuck some wood in. After i did that all away around the circle i had drawn I went back to find some more supplies.After about 10 minutes of searching the creapy woods, i found some tree vine. I took a sharp rock, next to it and cut nearly 10 feet of vine. I went back to find my tent looking the same as it did, witch was good. I took some vine and tied it together, i made a roof, started a fire still hoping to find help, and made a small leafy bed. As i drifted to sleep, sitting in the cold, I heard a chopper coming around here. i jumped up and ran to the fire. i had put a lot of leafs in again, and as i watched the chopper just float by. it didnt come. Im not giving up on help. I just really help help comes soon!

    - Rachael Holter, January 14th, 2010

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  17. first I went into the wild to collect some tall thick grass.next I piled it on top of eachother and have a tall stick hold it up. For food I would look for wood so I could build a fire. Then I went into the wild to look for small animals.

    After I cooked my food I would well, eat it. Afetr that I got on my computer to draw and paintthe stuff that happened today.the next day Iwent and did the same thing. I hunted,built a fire, and ate. Then when i got on my compuetr I tried to go to the internet but it wouldn't let me so i went to sleep.

    blake marasco, january 14,2010

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  18. The first thing I had was a lot of fish,but the fish wint away from me . How did I get the fish ? Well I found a tree and made a fiahing pole out of it and the string is my shoe and the hook is a tree to but it was heard to make it.

    The number two thing I'm going to do is make a bed so I can go to sleep . I hope someone comes and saves me so I put SOS .

    CESAR 1-14-10

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  19. I got pushed to shore and i had my computer with me no food no water but the ocean water,it was really green and dirty .I tried to make a bed before it got dark but it just wouldn't stay.At last it stay and the sun was gone,the animals and bugs were makeing lots of noises.I tried to go to sleep but the was makeing me stay asleep.Finaly i fell asleep,i dreamed of makeing something like a fire so people could find me.
    It was morning and icouldnt find anything to make a fire ,then i found a tire(once i watched on i shouldnt be alive i learned that you can burn a tire and people could find you)so i burned it and a helecopterand they found me and gave me some water and food.

    samantha january 14,2010

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  20. I had just washed up at this one mysterious island. My head had hurt real bad i thought of what had just happened. I was lost confused and injured because when i had looked down my leg was bleading.I didn't know what happen but i know that i had to stop my foot from bleading, make me a shelter, find some food,and find away to get out of this island.
    So i went to the forest to check for what i could use to make a shelter and stop my bleading. So i ripped off a leaf and got some vine and tied it around my leg. Then I when to find some broken pieces of wood and i got alot of vines and I built my self a tree house it was hard because it was only me but i still maneged to do this.finnaly I spotted two crab I attacked them and built a fire I made myself a crab. It was really good.I know I was going to be there along time but i didnt care.

    jonathan trinidad january 14 2009

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  21. I awoke and found i was standed an an island floting ashor my laptop came back to me it started to rain i finely found selter in a cave and gust my luck it turnd out my laptop broke during the flote to shore. then a gient bear came out of noware thank hevens it did not find me'shigh' time to start a camp fire that never happend. I went fishing I got halabit and cat fish found three coconuts too I ate and slept in a tree i was rudely awakend by a tunder storm and had to find a place to hide three hours after the storm had ended it was the nexed day.

    so it was the second day i was stranded. hope some one finds me. I tried to make a fire fished then i spoted somthing in the distance it was a baot .-riley mott

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  22. This morning I woke to a big spider on my shoulder. After I smashed the spider with a rock I found, I noticed that I was laying on a bed made of sticks and leaves. I also noticed that I had a laptop and a axe, there was a plane leaving with a couple people on it. I tried to signal them but they didn't see me. I then woke up.

    -Jeremiah Johnson,january 14th 2010

    I figured out how to make shelter and found some food. I walked north a little bit and found a city. i /

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  23. Today is my second day on this deserted island.I must have hit my head on something because ican't rember how i got here. I have built a shelter out of sticks and leaves. I t is morning time i think but i am really hunry so iam going out to look for something to eat. i have been walking around for awhile and i have found some coconuts under a tree. Now all i have to do is crack the coconut.
    I have found food and what looks like clean water. iam scared but i am hope ful my family is looking for me.IAM TIRED NOW So ithink i will get off my computer now.

    ashley nelsen,janyuary 14

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  24. I had no idea where I was. I tryed to find a place to stay warm. Then I made a shelter. After I went and found food and water.. well obviously I already knew where to find water. After.. I tryed to make a fire. But of course... it didnt work. So I went to my shelter and fell fast asleep...
    When I woke up It was the next day. I still didnt know where I was. So I went looking around for clues. All I found was alot of snow and ice.. and water. There was also alot of trees. I really tryed to find a way home. But I was lost. And I mesn really lost. I wondered if anyone had tryed to come and find me. I hoped so. After all that I came bac. And got on my computer and wrote all this. Now Im tired so Im gonna go to bed. Hopefully somebody will have found me by then.

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  25. I had no idea where I was. I tryed to find a place to stay warm. Then I made a shelter. After I went and found food and water.. well obviously I already knew where to find water. After.. I tryed to make a fire. But of course... it didnt work. So I went to my shelter and fell fast asleep...



    When I woke up It was the next day. I still didnt know where I was. So I went looking around for clues. All I found was alot of snow and ice.. and water. There was also alot of trees. I really tryed to find a way home. But I was lost. And I mesn really lost. I wondered if anyone had tryed to come and find me. I hoped so. After all that I came bac. And got on my computer and wrote all this. Now Im tired so Im gonna go to bed. Hopefully somebody will have found me by then.

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  26. I would look on my computer to see if I had pictures of food. If I did I would look at it and it would be good.if not then iI would try to get a net type thing and a shirt or bowl and then I would try to make water with out salty stuff. Id be bored.

    It would suck because I wouldnt have any friends:( . I would be bored i would pull put a gun if I had one and shoot a shrk and eat it. Id try to make shelter. Id id live happily ever sad.

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  27. This is my first day being stranded. It really sucks. I have been collecting food all day. My laptop is still working and I do not know what to do with it.
    This is my second day being stranded. I hate finding food and gathering rain water to eat and drink. I am working on bulding a selter. I hope someone is looking for me.

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  28. I walked around the island to get an idea on what the island look like. After I checked out the island I started looking for supplies to build shelter. I spent half the day building my shelter to make sure it was stable. Then I went to look for food.
    I searched the whole island and found a couple of berry bushes and gathered as many bushes as I could carry. On my way back to my shelter I was looking for some wood to start a fire with. I found enough to get me through the night. Once I reached my shelter I got the fire going and tries to figure out how I was going to get off this island.

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  29. If I was stranded on a island my first day would be hard becuase I never been stranded on a island before. The first night I would look for food and sticks,leaves and water to survive. I would eat stuff like fruit. Not animals. I wouldn't kill a animal for food. I would build my shelter out of leaves, sticks and other materials to make me shelter. Its night time and my water supply is running low so I go out in the dense fog to get some more water and I heard someone wispering so I see who it is but noone is there. So I keep walking then I heard it again I started to walk faster. I was scared. But then I look back its was just a animal.

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  30. If I was stranded on an island the first day I would whrite on my conputer about how i got stranded. then I would do stuff like climb trees to keep myself ocupied.then I would go fight sharks and win money yay!!!!
    the second day I would find food and water then i would get a crab or something and keep it as a pet. but I hope I dont get that desperate.then i would call room service and the would get me a jet then i would go home.I just hope that i dont get stuck on a island THE END!!!

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  31. This is my first day on the island, its really hot and I am starting to get tired but I need to make shelter. I have cut down some trees with my pocket knife for my shelter. I am trying to find food and im have no luck I have only found a few cocanuts. I have found some fresh water to drink and I have caught some fish to eat.
    This is my second day on the island I am really hungry and i dont know how much longer I can last. I am starting to hallucinate. I am really scared that I will die. I have been found by a boat, I am really happy that i surived.

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  32. Today I was sranded on the island still no one else just me and this big island. Last night I went to sleep hungry as my bed it was the in an old tree and Islept on a branch. Then it was morning and I got to fine food im starving I said with my stomach growling. I was walking and something hit my heasd I look on the ground and there it was as bannana I grabed it and ate it as fast as posible.
    saw a monkey and saw a monkey. I chased it around a tree. I tackeled him and held him hostage. And made him my pet.

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  33. I tryed to find a place that had shelter. I tryed to find a place that had internet connection. After I was done with all of that I found food and water. I ate fish and i drank the sea water. I also tryed to build a fire but... unfortionatly it didn't work. I went to the place that i had to build with tree wood. Which was my shelter.



    When i woke up the next morning, I still didn't no where in the world I was. I tryed looking for foot trackes to maybe a nearby store or a place that they could help me. I tryed to follow tracks that I thought were people tracks, but it ended up they were animal tracks and they led to nowhere. I went back to my laptop and played games to try and pass time.

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  34. Melissa Garcia R. [:January 14, 2010 at 2:21 PM

    This is my second day on the island.
    It is very hard to find water since it is in the heart of the island and there are very hazarous animals and plants and landscapes in my way.Food is hard to find also,since most of it is surrounded by very angry monkeys,snakes,spiders.So iHave to do it when they are sleeping because if not.iWould starve.

    iWonder if my family has started to look for me yet.Its already been one day and iReally miss them.Right now im longing for the voice of my sweet kids and my lovely husband.How they always greeted me with their sweet smiles.But right now im killing time of getting food and water before the sun goes down ,so im going to let this go .
    Until tomorrow [if im still alive ..]
    Melissa Garcia R. [:
    Jan.14.2010

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  35. I am all alone with nothing to do. Someone please come save me. There is nothing to eat besides dead fish or other animals, and let me tell you, I'd rather eat vegetables. I am floating around the ocean. I have no idea what part of the ocean. Please, please help!
    Ok, now I am starting day two. Last night, I heard a lot of animal noises, and they don't sound pretty.I have no shelter, and I am really starting to miss my family, and my stomach growling, isn't really helping. I can't stand it here so PLEASE, SOMEBUDDY CALL 911!!!!!, NO JOKE!!!! HELP MEEEEE!!!!!

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  36. Today as awoke I relized I wasnt in my usual spot...(in my bed)! Instead i awoke on a mysterious island. For one fact for sure i knew I was going to have to come up with a survival plan. The first thing I did was made sure that i had shelter. I started by finding some sticks and and twigs...i used the sticks to build the house and i used the twigs to keep the house together. Next i made sure that i had some food, I then went hunting being on an island my really only option was to hunt for fish. After suppling food for myself, I then reallY all i needed to survive...FOOD and SHELTER! The clothes i had on would hopefully last me untill i was found. Next i had to find out how to pass the time away so next decided to explore the little island. When i was finished I went back to shelter. Thats where i curled up and found a nice place in my stick house to sleep! BTW...that was only day 1!
    DAY 2...As i woke up i relized that once again i was not in my own bed! I started the day just like yesterday i made sure that i had enough food supply to last the day again. Next I thought well...i probably should enjoy myself since i have never been on a stranded island before...! SO i did...by swimming, laying on the shore, working in my tan. I actually had fun! That evening around who kno time...CAUSE i didnt have a clock, my family came searching for me... I was kind bummed. Well now you know what I did while being stranded. The question now is...WHAT WOULD YOU DO TO SURVIVE?

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  37. Today was my first day being stranded on an island.I feel like I'm the only person on earth.I found some crabs to eat and some supplies to make for shelter.I hope someone can find me.
    It is my second day being stranded on this island.No one has come for me yet.I am starting to lose confidence in anyone trying to find me.I again find few things to eat.I hope help will come.

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  38. Ok. This really sucks!!! I have been stranded on this very boring island for two days strait!!! All I have is this laptop and nothing else to entertain me. All that I have to eat are bananas, and I absolutely hate bananas!!! Well the bright side is that I can relax at a warm, tropical place where no one will bother me!!!
    This is the worst thing that happened to me when I was on this island. I was relaxing feeling like I was home with my friends and family, and a monkey walked up to me. I tried to walk away from it because I know I don't want to get attacked by anything, but right when I was gonna get up, the monkey jumped on me and yanked on my hair!!!! Then, the next thing he did was just walk away! What the heck was that for??? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE GET ME OFF OF THIS ISLAND!!! I'M GETTING ABSOLUTELY MISERABLE!!!!! :(

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  39. I woke up on the shore of an abandoned island. I didn't know where I was, or how I got there. All I remember is that I was flying to my father's house in Hawaii, but this is a deserted island, maybe somewhere around Hawaii. Oh my, I need to call my father! I pulled out my cellphone and saw that there wasn't a signal. I was worried, confused, hungry, and I had a huge headache! Well it was around evening and I remember that I got on the plane at 5 AM... how long have I been asleep, and where is the plane!
    I got up, and was light-headed for a few seconds. I saw that the island was completely quite, and there wasn't any sound. It was kind of creepy. I saw something in the shadows of the palm trees, and walked towards it to see it better. It looked like...a bag? I walked over to it and it was. So I dumped it out and the only things in there was a photo album, baby supplies, and a small mysterious package. I shook it and heard nothing at all. I decided to slowly open it. When I opened it, I found newly developed pictures of terrified people. Then I was really scared. What should I do? Where is everyone that was on the plane? The old man snoring, the little kids jumping around? Where are all these people in the photographs, and who are they? Why is this package here? Where was my brother???
    to be continued...

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  40. Today is my first day on the island and there's barely any food.I'm am getting sunburn really bad.I need to search the island with Mary for food.So far we have found food outside the jungle and were planing to see were we can spend the night over.Mary has found big grreen leaves that we can use as shades for the sun.
    Mary has found some friends that can help us survive the island for more time.This has been are 4th day here and we are running out of food!!On the next day i got up really early to see if I could find food so we could all eat becuse its been 1 day sense we all have eaten.I hope that they can find us!!!!HELP US

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  41. Today is the first night I have to spend alone on this creepy island. I had no food except for raw fish and it was so nasty. After I would get done eating I would usually go walk around and explore the island just incase I have to saty here a while then I could have an idea where to put traps for other food, to get things to make a shelter, and if something seems out of place then I would know that there was an animal there.
    Then I was walking on the beach and I saw a gary square at the corner of my eye. I went to go investigate. IT WAS MY LAPTOP! I tried to get on the internet to make contact with my family so that can come to get me from that island. I went to walk along the shore some more until I saw ANNA!!!! She was also stranded. When we were together and walking around we found a good place to build a shelter. When we were done making the shelter I had to sleep OUTSIDE beacuse anna was being the "want to be boss"! So in the morning I had really bad back pain and anna was pain free. I was mad at her. So that night when she was sleeping I pushed her onto the floor. The next morning I was pain free and she was the one with all the pain.
    When we were messenging or help (which kept failing) all of a sudden it went through and someone had wrote us back...

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  42. On the first day I washed up on shore I looked for some branches that fell off a tree to make a little house. It was hard to find the branches because the nearest ones were about two miles away from shore. What I ate on the first day was fish. When it was night time it took me a few hour to get to sleep because I thought something might come and attack me.
    On the second day I looked for a long stick and a sharp rock. I used the rock to sharpen the stick to make a weapon for hunting. I found a small deer and throw the stick at it. The stick missed the deer and I went to pick up the stick and I found a lot of houses and people. I ask one of the people if Icould use their phone. I called for help and the came in a hour

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  43. I just woke up with a horrible headache and sand in my hair.I got up and looked around and found nothing but a couple of coconuts and a bag. Wait,a bag that looks like mine. I ran up to it and dumped all of its contents and found a lipgloss container, a cell phone, a birthday card. That's all I have. I stood up and fell back down again. I must have hit my head.

    After i got up for the second time I saw something. It looked like a ... a bag. I ran over to it. Then found a cell phone,and a camera. That's all there was .i heard a roar. i looked up and saw a airplane. I'm saved.

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